Final Cut - Feedback

Today we watched each group's final cut and gave feedback to each.
These were the following comments we received.

The Good

- Interesting Storyline
- Main Protagonist is introduced
- Clever use of card tag titles
- Good smooth camerawork
- Obvious and clear genre
- Showed good conventions of RomCom/Teens genre (paper with ELLIE)
- Opening sets the rest of the film up well.
- Soundtrack fits with the genre
- Good use of props (books, paper, costumes)
- Initial questions (Why is he trying to impress her)

To Improve

- Soundtrack was a little repetitive
- Not much happens in the scene (could be due to long shot of Ollie)